Tasty Moon
In Heaven’s oven
the moon is a chunky pie
sugar-coated and crusty,
as plump as a donut,
as dimpled as a dumpling —
Good enough to eat.
Dianne Bates
Tasty Moon
In Heaven’s oven
the moon is a chunky pie
sugar-coated and crusty,
as plump as a donut,
as dimpled as a dumpling —
Good enough to eat.
Dianne Bates
Australian Children’s Poetry 
Lovely. Great imagery. Thank you.
Yum!
Yum! Lovely poem
Have never imagined the moon to be like this, it’s lovely.
Yes!
That’s a delicious morsel of metaphor , Di .
Beautiful poem. Well done!