A Cinquain for a Train by James Aitchison

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railcars

silvery sleek

rattling, clicking, clacking

my very special adventure

outback

The Savannahlander train crossing a creek, North Queensland. Photo by Ginette Pestana

Teacher’s note: A cinquain is an unrhymed five-line poem that has a 2-4-6-8-2 syllable count.
Line 1: a one-word noun (the subject of the poem)
Line 2: two adjectives that describe Line 1
Line 3: a three-word verbal phrase that further describes Line 1
Line 4: a four-word phrase that shows a feeling toward Line 1
Line: a one-word noun synonymous with or related to Line 1
Writing cinquains is great fun for students.
(Note: “special” is a two-syllable word!)