A flitting moment
It settles on a daisy head
and spreads its wings apart.
This butterfly, it must be said
is quite a work of art.
Colours rich and patterns rife,
a mini Persian rug.
To think it started out in life
an ugly little bug.
Jenny Erlanger
It settles on a daisy head
and spreads its wings apart.
This butterfly, it must be said
is quite a work of art.
Colours rich and patterns rife,
a mini Persian rug.
To think it started out in life
an ugly little bug.
Jenny Erlanger
A lovely, quirky poem – with your touch, Jenny. Thank you.
Thank you for the feedback. It’s much appreciated.
A lovely memorable poem.
Love this poem, Jenny. You are so clever!
Thank you for your kind comments.
Lovely Jenny.
Always enjoy your poems, Jenny, and this is no exception. Well done!
Thanks Bill. Your comments are always appreciated.
Good one! Loved it!
Thanks Myra. I’m glad you liked it.
A butterfly beautifully and economically captured. Delightful!
Thank you Monty. I’ve enjoyed reading your contributions as well.
Nice rhythm and imagery. Thanks for sharing it with us!
Thank you for the feedback Lynelle. It’s great to know there are people out there who enjoy children’s poetry.