River Run
Run river run:
sIlver over stones
riVer sobs and moans;
briEf gleam in the sun:
riveR run and run.
Run River run
rapId to the seas;
riVer leap with ease,
tEasing just for fun:
River run and run.
Jaz Stutley
- Submitted in response to Poetry Prompt #19

Very clever use of the prompt Jaz.
Clever and evocative. Thank you.
Jaz, I like the way you’ve structured your acrostic poem.
Fun to play with, isn’t it Jaz – i like you wandering letters in a river like flow. I wanted to include a reference to Alice Liddell, but i couldn’t manage it – or thought the complication would be over kids’ heads…
Thanks, Tricia – took a bit of juggling!